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Sunday, February 28, 2010

2nd part of octo compo

I rushed out of my room when I heard the octopus knocking down the front of my house, only to see my father and mother alive for the last time. They was picked up and snapped like a twig by the octopus. I wanted to escape, but there was little chance for me. I was trapped. My only hope of escape was to run past the enormous octopus. My attempt was futile as the octopus flung me back towards the wall. "Help!" Daniel heard me shout as he arrived at my front porch. The octopus was closing in on me, and Daniel suddenly appeared! My saviour had arrived!

The shrinking device whirred to life as Daniel pressed the red button. A beam of red shot out, engulfing the octopus in a shroud of amber. Daniel came to pick me onto my feet, after brandishing a scanner and scanning the body of the octopus. From the display, Daniel could see the thoughts of the octopus- its life, everything the octopus ever thought of.

I was adopted by Daniel after this, as my family were all killed. With my free time, I wrote a short story about the incidents that happened, and that is what you are reading now.

1 Comments:

Blogger MrBotAk(anoymous) said...

can we really write about our compositions?

March 1, 2010 at 10:48 PM  

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